I am honored that you ask my opinion. But, as you know, I am amateur, so I am not sure if I can give you (or anybody) a constructive comment. I'll do my best. Despite of the green grass and the blue sky with white clouds, the scene have a little dramatic and painfully touch because of the tone of the colors. It is very good for that sentence you gave in description - ambivalence. The rip with the black background highlights that there must be the much deeper problem between two people. They are so tiny, they are so far, the meadow is so big, the sky is so big, the rip is so dark, so dominant ... She even has an umbrella. Against what? What is it so invisible, but yet present!? Still, they are facing each other. He is trying hard to reach her. She is standing, in some pose, like defending herself of her own inner thoughts and feelings. Yes, she is waiting. But - what!? Who made the rip, and what it presents? Etc. etc. Great work.
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